These last few weeks have been difficult
abraded by the cold tapwater mornings
the watery sunless afternoons and all
the beads of bad news which hang heavy
together, all this buffeting by failure, by
failed promises and failed expectations
yes, these things happen, and they have
happened now. You are torn for a while
by disappointments, by the loss of long-
held imaginings. We all are, sometimes.
Still, there is a cat sleeping in a slant
of sunlight; there is a flock of girls on
the green, a windless fall of snow, and
a film you want to see in the cinema.
Shake out from the cloth of the month
those few hours that troubled you
and let them fall. Take comfort.
They are no longer in your future.
They can never hurt so much again.

12 comments:
I can feel the emotions of the poet, brilliant Fiendish. I am looking forward too to your short story. So much talent for someone so young.
Cheers and God bless.
This is a poem I'd like to repeat to myself quite often when I sink into my frequent winter doldrums.
I like that way it moves forwards and I like the 'flock of girls'.
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I like the flock of girls... I see them.
Francis has something there. Maybe I will use this as my new Mantra and do away (finally) with Dunnes Stores Girl.
Oops, did I say that out loud? :)
Shake out from the cloth of the month
those few hours that troubled you
and let them fall. Take comfort.
They are no longer in your future.
is what I shall take away with me. That, I think, is tremendous.
Jena: Thanks for dropping by, glad you liked it :)
Francis: That's precisely why I wrote it. Thanks for a lovely comment.
Rachel: Yay! Thank you.
Ken: I am HIGHLY intrigued by Dunnes Stores Girl. Who? What? "Finally"?!
Dave: Thank you so much; I'm glad you took something from it.
It's not as cool as it sounds but I'll tell you.
There's a song called 'The Dunne's stores girl' and, for some reason, if I start to sing it when I'm alone on a long drive, I can sing it for an hour without stopping and it's very relaxing. Like a Mantra, really.
"Hey, check out the dunne's stores girl
She's the one who rules my world
I'm gonna walk down the aisle with the dunnes stores girl
Gonna walk down the aisle with the dunnes stores girl
She rules my world" (Then back to the start)
I'll hum it for ya when I see you. :)
I'm caught by the same part of the poem as Dave. This is just perfect for the New Year blues...
Enjoy I did, very much. If one more news bulletin informs me, as if the information were as fresh as dew, that we are facing the deepest recession since the fall of Rome, I shall weep. This spirit lifter should be woven into a sampler. And this is far from 'free' verse: it's beautifully crafted and structured. Do more.
Poetry witnessing and bringing relief, its redeeming gust is what I have read here.
Best wishes, Davide
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Happy Happy.
I think your poetry is superb!
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