Friday, February 6, 2009

On Sorrow

These last few weeks have been difficult

abraded by the cold tapwater mornings

the watery sunless afternoons and all

the beads of bad news which hang heavy

together, all this buffeting by failure, by

failed promises and failed expectations

yes, these things happen, and they have

happened now. You are torn for a while

by disappointments, by the loss of long-

held imaginings. We all are, sometimes.

Still, there is a cat sleeping in a slant

of sunlight; there is a flock of girls on

the green, a windless fall of snow, and

a film you want to see in the cinema.

Shake out from the cloth of the month

those few hours that troubled you

and let them fall. Take comfort.

They are no longer in your future.

They can never hurt so much again. 

12 comments:

Jena Isle said...

I can feel the emotions of the poet, brilliant Fiendish. I am looking forward too to your short story. So much talent for someone so young.

Cheers and God bless.

Francis Scudellari said...

This is a poem I'd like to repeat to myself quite often when I sink into my frequent winter doldrums.

Rachel Fox said...

I like that way it moves forwards and I like the 'flock of girls'.
x

Ken Armstrong said...

I like the flock of girls... I see them.

Francis has something there. Maybe I will use this as my new Mantra and do away (finally) with Dunnes Stores Girl.

Oops, did I say that out loud? :)

Dave King said...

Shake out from the cloth of the month

those few hours that troubled you

and let them fall. Take comfort.

They are no longer in your future.


is what I shall take away with me. That, I think, is tremendous.

Fiendish said...

Jena: Thanks for dropping by, glad you liked it :)

Francis: That's precisely why I wrote it. Thanks for a lovely comment.

Rachel: Yay! Thank you.

Ken: I am HIGHLY intrigued by Dunnes Stores Girl. Who? What? "Finally"?!

Dave: Thank you so much; I'm glad you took something from it.

Ken Armstrong said...

It's not as cool as it sounds but I'll tell you.

There's a song called 'The Dunne's stores girl' and, for some reason, if I start to sing it when I'm alone on a long drive, I can sing it for an hour without stopping and it's very relaxing. Like a Mantra, really.

"Hey, check out the dunne's stores girl
She's the one who rules my world
I'm gonna walk down the aisle with the dunnes stores girl
Gonna walk down the aisle with the dunnes stores girl
She rules my world" (Then back to the start)

I'll hum it for ya when I see you. :)

Catherine @ Sharp Words said...

I'm caught by the same part of the poem as Dave. This is just perfect for the New Year blues...

patteran said...

Enjoy I did, very much. If one more news bulletin informs me, as if the information were as fresh as dew, that we are facing the deepest recession since the fall of Rome, I shall weep. This spirit lifter should be woven into a sampler. And this is far from 'free' verse: it's beautifully crafted and structured. Do more.

Anonymous said...

Poetry witnessing and bringing relief, its redeeming gust is what I have read here.

Best wishes, Davide

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Ken Armstrong said...

Happy Happy.

Kilauea Poetry said...

I think your poetry is superb!

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