Took a whole (Super) Tuesday off homework to watch the Inaugural Address, and wrote this kind-of response to it. This is still pretty rough, but I'm not thinking I'll have much time to work on it in the near future.
Women Obscure in Their Labour
The inauguration comes
one month before my eighteenth birthday
along with day-late prickling of cramps.
My mother is in the city
and the girls from school sign out
to apply for university before the deadline.
At home, I switch the television on and
watch thousands of tiny flags blur into pink
and my best friend texts me:
“things are changing today”.
This is not a love poem
unless it is for her, or for myself,
for the trumpet players, flag-wavers
swaddled in coats and badges
for Nancy, Hillary and Michelle
for those who watch this in
dreaming of home and for those who
watch at home, dreaming of
for this flush restless fertility
which is both mine and not mine
or somehow shared because in this
hope – and there is hope –
we all are bound together, each to each.

4 comments:
When I googled the phrase, your post was the top entry ... followed by references to Obama's speech :). It was definitely a celebratory day here in Chicago, but I think people will find that change is much easier spoken of than enacted. I think the gender barrier to the US Presidency should be the next to fall ... it's well overdue.
I like the text and the last two lines very much. I also like the cramps getting in there - hard to write about without making (some) people wince...for different reasons...but still worth trying all the same!
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Francis: I agree - and I don't think it's an overly expectant poem. His inauguration in itself marked a change; for the time being, it's enough to have that.
Rachel: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I knew it wouldn't be to some people's tastes, but hey. Femininity has been winced out of our male version of reality for too long ;)
"Which is both mine and not mine", that's *so* true. Many of us feel some ownership of the event but we don't... but we do... but we don't.
Very good.
What's a cramp? (rhetorical) :)
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